Friday, October 8, 2010

Dialogue Comic


























I made a comic with me and Ms. Evans. We were talking about her cat which was a very appropriate topic to talk about. While we were talking about her, Ms. Mckeone rudly interuppted us while we were tallking. She said she was sorry about it. Talking to Ms. Evans reminded me of a dialogue which is two people having a conversation. I said one thing to her and she gave me a response back to me.

2 comments:

  1. Nice work using the new vocabulary words and demonstrating what you learned about the rules of dialogue.

    Here is a writing rule you haven't learned yet:
    When you you the word 'which' in a sentence, you typically place a comma before it.

    For example:

    Talking to Ms. Evans reminded me of a dialogue, which is when two people are having a conversation.

    1 Though/Sentence
    1 Punctuation Mark
    1st letter of every sentence capitalized.
    Following directions

    A = $4.00

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  2. Vincent,

    Your work is not complete. You need to fix your sentence because it dose not make sense. Think about what you need in your sentence. Make sure to write about what you just learned about your work. Nice job to finish in time.

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